Matthew 21: 28-32

Come Work For Jesus

SPEECH JUDGING CRITERIA

SPEAKER: Ascott	CLASS
TITLE: Pacific Islanders.		MARK
INTRODUCTION • audience is hooked in with an interesting quotes or jokes or statistical information	8	/10
Presentation and Delivery • Facial and body gestures must enhance not distract from   the speech • Use of eye-contact • Relaxed stance • Use o8f pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message • Variety of pace	11	/15
Content of Speech • The message of the speech is clear • Is it relevant,, meaningful clear and concise? 6 • Ideas are well elaborated and supported. Use of specific vocabulary Clear sequence and flow	12	/20
CONCLUSION Argument is summed up Has an overall impact Audience Reaction	4	/ 5
TOTAL REMARKS. 3 things I have done well I spoke loud and clearly , also talking with good eye contact. I structured my speech great by doing a opening statement, Introduction, Body and Conclusion. I had a Connection with the audience by hooking them with interesting topic. 3 things that I could do better I could of speak with a bit more confidence. Could of used more adjectives to get more attention. Could of use a quote and use more phrases.

Expressive Writing About My Morning

My Morning

I wake up still feeling exhausted since our rugby tournament yesterday.  I drag myself off the bed and started my day lazy.  I hear the sweet birds tweet sweetly and happily from their nests.  I had a delightful and blissful breakfast which woke me up perfectly for my day. I strolled slowly and got my stationary organised for school.  My sister shouts to me to quickly come outside, so I dashed out and accelerated off to school.

Expressive Writing PI Students

Expressive Writing  P.I Students or Pacific Islanders.

I have chosen this writing because this writing  I want my people to know about this and why they should think real hard about what is happening with us compared to everyone.  Also I want them to know we need to make a change with our lives.

All I hear these days are pacific Islanders are not achievers.  Everytime I hear it I get frustrated, confused and it’s like getting slapped in the face. Some people think it’s funny to be at the bottom, but it’s really embarrassing especially for people who do care.  Is it because where different coloured people to others or are we just doing it because it is what brown people supposed to act like.  I'm trying to make a change for me and for my culture, by the way we express each other to public, families, education and communities.

RE - SACRAMENT HOLY COMMUNION

Viliami and I have explored on the sacrament of HOLY COMMUNION.

Expressive Writing

I am 13 years old.I am gifted with all sorts of talent.  I am a witness of Jesus by following his footsteps and by standing up for my faith to others who go against it.  I am a challenging and a complicated boy in everything I do. I am created as a gigantic and a colossal looking boy.  Combative and cruel is not my type. I am a blissful, elated, amusing, respectful, active and a managing self boy.