My Description ( My Dad)
I am learning to write a description writing with describing words.
My father rocks my world. My father has black curly hair, brown eyes and a gold tooth. My father is a bit tall and he usually wears a t-shirt with track pants. He is a bit roundish but just the way I like it.
My father is a smart person and a supporting father because he makes sure I have everything I need for school. My father is a man of his word when he promises me he would buy me new things he would do it the following week.
My father is a fit and healthy man he runs on Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays on the Mountain or at the block on his street. My father is a hard worker because he provides food for my family and he pays the bills. My father is a bad cooker because sometimes he cooks the meat undercook or it gets burnt.
Every time when I look at my father he has a big smile which lights my day. I love my father I’ll always remember the happy and fun things we had. Thats why my dad is special to me and I’ll treasure that.
Ascot this is a truly moving piece of writing. You must be so proud of your Dad. I do hope you show him this writing.
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